2012.2.3 每日当三省吾身，每日三译之二 kiss, world

白天羽

The world puts off its
mask of vastness to its lover。It omes small as one song, as one kiss of the
enternal.

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世界在他的爱人面前摘下面具。变得小如一首歌，小如一个永恒之吻。

小尾巴猪

世界对着它的爱人，把它浩瀚的面具揭下了。它变小了，小如一首歌，小如一回永恒的亲吻。

xiahme

The world puts off its mask of vastness to its lover,it becomes small as one song,as one kiss of the eternal
世界在自己爱人面前脱去它巨大的面具，变得小如一首歌，如永恒的一个吻

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not “The world puts off its mask of vastness to its lover。It omes small as one song, as one kiss of the enternal.”but "The world puts off its mask of vastness to its lover,it becomes small as one song,as one kiss of the eternal."?
世界对着它的爱人，脱去巨大的伪装，它变得小了，小如一首歌，小如一个永恒的吻。
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