12月17日诗文赏析：This is the beginning of a new day beginning, new, day

youxiaxiaolala

read the article carefully and then translate it or write  down your feeling to gain the score

This is the beginning of a new day.

God has given me this day to use as I will,

I can waste it or use it for good,

but what I do today is important,

because I am exchanging a day of my life for it!

When tomorrow comes, this day will be gone forever,

leaving in its place something that I have traded for it.

I want it to be gain, and not lose.

Good, and not evil; Success, and not failure,

in order that I shall not regret the price that I have paid for it.

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powder.rb

回复 1# youxiaxiaolala


    this poem remind me of a song ，which is called 'start of something new'

powder.rb

work hard from now on!

红电

新手报到。来学习的。谢谢楼主！

1479737204

yesterday has gone,today is on your hand,tommrow is unknown.so cherish today.

wjxuhua

This is the beginning of a new day.
新的一天开始了。

God has given me this day to use as I will,
如我所愿，上帝把今天的支配权赋予了我。
I can waste it or use it for good,
可以消磨掉，可以善加利用

but what I do today is important,
我今天的行为很重要，

because I am exchanging a day of my life for it!
因为那是我用生命中的一天换来的！

When tomorrow comes, this day will be gone forever,
明天的到来让今天永远消逝，

leaving in its place something that I have traded for it.
只留下我换来的那些东西。

I want it to be gain, and not lose.
我想有所收获，而不是有所失去。

Good, and not evil; Success, and not failure,
我想获得美好，而不是邪恶； 我想取得成功，而不是失败，

in order that I shall not regret the price that I have paid for it.
因为我不想为自己所付的代价后悔。

dont5050550

有得听的吗？

王笑天

good poetry

ellenhao123

God has given me this day to use as I will,

I can waste it or use it for good,

but what I do today is important,

because I am exchanging a day of my life for it!

Banana乐

回复 4# 雪花片


    It is important that you want it to be gain ,not to be lose.

sunnyraintsk

this is the beginning of a new day.

lilo520

顶一下，不错不错....

along979

有音频么？

kinglongyy

This is the beginning of a new day.
新的一天开始了。

God has given me this day to use as I will,
如我所愿，上帝把今天的支配权赋予了我。
I can waste it or use it for good,
可以消磨掉，可以善加利用

but what I do today is important,
我今天的行为很重要，

because I am exchanging a day of my life for it!
因为那是我用生命中的一天换来的！

When tomorrow comes, this day will be gone forever,
明天的到来让今天永远消逝，

leaving in its place something that I have traded for it.
只留下我换来的那些东西。

I want it to be gain, and not lose.
我想有所收获，而不是有所失去。

Good, and not evil; Success, and not failure,
我想获得美好，而不是邪恶； 我想取得成功，而不是失败，

in order that I shall not regret the price that I have paid for it.
因为我不想为自己所付的代价后悔。

cheerful

这是新的一天的开始
如我所愿，上帝已经将它赐予了我
我可以将它浪费也可以将它很好的利用
但我今天做什么才是重要的
因为这是用我生命中的一天交换来的！
当明天来临，今天将永远离去。
留下的是我所换取的，
我要有所收获，而无损失
美好而不邪恶，成功而不失败
只有这样我才不会为我付出的代价而后悔

请大家指教

cheerful

不错的文章，今天发现了这个版很开心

雪花片

i wan to say more, can you offer more beautiful and difficult poems or essays, or on what basis you present those things?

雪花片

This is the beginning of a new day.
新的一天开始了。

God has given me this day to use as I will,
如我所愿，上帝把今天的支配权赋予了我。
I can waste it or use it for good,
可以消磨掉，可以善加利用

but what I do today is important,
我今天的行为很重要，

because I am exchanging a day of my life for it!
因为那是我用生命中的一天换来的！

When tomorrow comes, this day will be gone forever,
明天的到来让今天永远消逝，

leaving in its place something that I have traded for it.
只留下我换来的那些东西。

I want it to be gain, and not lose.
我想有所收获，而不是有所失去。

Good, and not evil; Success, and not failure,
我想获得美好，而不是邪恶； 我想取得成功，而不是失败，

in order that I shall not regret the price that I have paid for it.
因为我不想为自己所付的代价后悔。

float

Everyone exchanging a day of their life for it,
So waste time just  waste life

453128346

This is the beginning of a new day.

Everyday is a new day and when it over, it became forever.
So we should do our best to  life  everyday.
Today is so cold. My god.