I am coming! help

darling10

Boys and girls,
   Hello!
   I am coming  back!   I have come here since last two morths. I like English and I like here even though my English is poor. But I have learnt a lot here. Thanks to everyone who helps me with my English. The final examination has been finished.I  have enough time to work at Tingroom！
   I wish everyone a good winter holiday!

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回复 1# darling10


    I have marked three of your mistakes in brackets which you have to revise once again.Anyway welcome you here !

darling10

回复 2# areyouready


    Ths . I will revise them.

darling10

回复 2# areyouready


    Could you pleases tell me the mistakes in detail?

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回复 4# darling10


    That's obvious and simple! I believe you can make it yourself!

darling10

回复 5# areyouready


    I am so sorry about that I only found two mistakes ...   Can you tell me the last one?

darling10

回复 2# areyouready


    ths!  You are very careful!

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回复 9# darling10


    You know that attitude is the most important thing for English learning! I believe you can do a better job next time!