请帮我修改一下,thanks thanks

呀呀

be  polite
A man was thirsty and tired .he said to the God ;Give me some water ,I need some  food ......
The God go crark and nothing  to give  him.You must first said 'please' the God said .
The man said again;'please give some water ,some food.......The God give him some food . Then the  
man  begined to eat . the God go louder roar,Why ?said the  man .Because you didn't say thank you.
let 's be polite to say  thank and please in everything.

呀呀

what you get is living, what you  give is a life.
Thanks!

呀呀

上帝给他一个响雷.............上帝给他一个闪电..........怎么译呢?

jinyanlina

Let  me have a try.
be  polite
A man was thirsty and tired .he said to the God ,"Give me some water and some  food ...... "
The God went by and  gave  him nothing."You must first say 'please' "the God said .
The man said again,please give me some water ,some food......."The God gave him some food . Then the  man  begined to eat . the God went by  and roared,:Why ?"said the  man ."Because you didn't say thank you."
let 's be polite to say  thank s and please on everything.