标题: 【作文练习1】How are you going to spend Chinese Valentine’s Day? [打印本页]
作者: evaxiaofan 时间: 2010-8-12 21:55 标题: 【作文练习1】How are you going to spend Chinese Valentine’s Day?
本帖最后由 快乐小婷 于 2010-8-22 15:14 编辑
为了更好的提高英语写作水平，特在这里提供一个“作文练习”的平台，供大家互相交流：
希望大家踊跃SHOW出自己的ESSAY（不必担心，迎接您的除了.gif)
还是 ）；当然，您也可以对别人
的ESSAY提出自己的看法，或者针对某些问题（语法、用词等等）提出自己的修改意见。
但是，不管您以何种方式参与，都会得到丰厚的学分作为奖励.gif)
哟！
（学分的多少会根据作文字数、正确及精彩程度而定，所以请大家尽量多写啊！）
衷心希望在这儿大家能一起进步 ！！！
情人节就快到了！所以，本期主题就是她了：
How are you going to spend Chinese Valentine's Day?
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祝各位情人节快乐
作者: crystal_09 时间: 2010-8-13 21:16
ah,I think this's day different of the others
i didn't spend that day.
作者: evaxiaofan 时间: 2010-8-13 22:59
本帖最后由 evaxiaofan 于 2010-8-14 10:23 编辑
2# crystal_09
That day is really special ,it not only makes the lovers sweeter than ever, but also makes more the lovers.gif)
So don't worry, maybe a boy will bravely bare his heart to you 
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ah,I think this's day different of(from) the others
i didn't (won't 可能用将来时会好点哟）spend that day.
作者: 谢 时间: 2010-8-14 08:59
you can keep a diary in English every day . I think you can improve your writing.
作者: evaxiaofan 时间: 2010-8-14 12:28
本帖最后由 evaxiaofan 于 2010-8-14 12:41 编辑
4# 谢
Thanks for your advice, and I think your writng is good.
if you'd like to have a try at this topic, that would be better.
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