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标题: 09年12月19日英语六级作文及参考范文 [打印本页]

作者: yoyo530521    时间: 2009-12-19 19:17     标题: 09年12月19日英语六级作文及参考范文

题目:Should parents send their kids to art classes?
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;
1、对这种做法有人表示支持,
2、有人并不赞成;
3、我认为…
范文:
Children are the future of the nation, the pearl in their parents’ eyes. Hoping that their kids can become the cream of the crop among others, more and more parents send their kids to various art classes to let them learn more. However, people hold different opinions toward this phenomenon.
Some people hold a firm position that it is a beneficial thing for kids to attend art classes. There, kids can not only learn some art skills that may helpful for them someday, they can also get a chance to expand their interests to a great extent, and their minds can also be broadened. Besides, kids can also make a lot of friends there, thus their communication skills may also be sharpened. While for the others, they hold an opposite opinion. They think parents should not send their kids to art classes blindly against kids’ will, because this will get a definitely negative impact on kids. Kids, in these parents’ eyes, should be given more flexible time to relax and do whatever they are interested in. And kids also need freedom because unacceptable art classes will absolutely eliminate the nature of kids. Thus, sending kids to these classes will undoubtedly hurt them.
Every coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, I think children’s interests should be taken into careful consideration before being sent to art classes. Children should be given enough freedom to develop by themselves. Whether parents should send their kids to art classes, it depends.
作者: 簿子酒    时间: 2009-12-20 12:27

不知道怎样,总之是写完了
用了很多关联词
分了3段
作者: x-ace    时间: 2009-12-21 09:10

会用关联词说明你会写文章,成绩应该不错的 2# 簿子酒
作者: 簿子酒    时间: 2009-12-21 11:33

希望




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