标题: 高考英语作文写作如何让句子“靓”起来 [打印本页]

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作者: 小尾巴猪    时间: 2012-2-20 12:34     标题: 高考英语作文写作如何让句子“靓”起来

高考英语书面表达高分作文已不局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要让文章的句子表达得更加地道，流畅，因此要想取得作文高分，我们要善于灵活运用高级句式、句型，熟练掌握润色句子的技能，让我们的文章靓起来。如何让我们的文章靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这仅限制在词汇层面上，更重要的是我们要灵活运用那些经典的句式。通过对低级句型的改变，可以达到语言优美这一目的。

　　◆感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ……”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此转换。

　　How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.

　　◆强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。

　　It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag in the classroom.
　　It was then that I realized the importance of English.

　　◆倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。

　　Only when I turned the right at the crossing did that car ran towards me.
　　Only by this means can he escaped from the big fire.

　　◆with的复合结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with复合结构。

　　With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits
　　He always likes to sleep with the windows open.

　　◆巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。

　　Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低级形式：When he heard that, ……)

　　◆恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。

　　After searching all my pockets, but nothing was found。

　　◆高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。

　　We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.

　　◆进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。

　　I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.

　　◆婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。

　　I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned  home  learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.

　　◆what引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。

　　What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it.

　　◆“数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词”。

　　As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests.

　　◆适当加一些插入语：一些连词、副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, what’s more等，有时可以考虑几个插入语连用，就更像英美人士的文章了。

　　◆独立主格：将主从句去掉连词，前句动词变为分词即可。

　　The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

　　◆把简单句改成复合句：适当的时候把两个简单句改成“too….to…”或者“so…that…”等高级一点的复合句。例如：

　　I was very tired. I couldn’t keep up with them.

　　可以改成：I was so tired that I couldn’t keep up with them.

　　或：I was too tired to keep up with them.

　　待你掌握了这些实用的句式，让句子靓起来便不再难，只要你坚持运用，相信孰能生巧，高考中就可以取得满意的成绩！

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作者: kobe    时间: 2012-2-20 13:55

some good sentences of college entrance examination

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