标题: 你赞成高中生去国外学习吗？come and check it,please? [打印本页] 作者: Jony-blue 时间: 2011-11-27 12:16 标题: 你赞成高中生去国外学习吗？come and check it,please?
Firstly,i'd to admit that i am poor at writing...so would you correct some mistakes for me ?
Personally i support the view that senior students can go abroad to study,to study in foreign country is a valuable experience,There you can know more knowledge that you can't learn on books because you will experience the cultural communications which are quite differen to our homeland.
Perhaps foreign educations are not always better than that here,but i don't oppose the idea even though it will cost a great deal of money.It does do good to students to improve their english skills,it can enable them to study efficiently.
Thanks for reading ,i got lots of words and grammar uncertain.作者: 小尾巴猪 时间: 2011-11-27 14:18
studying in foreign countries is a valuable experience.In abroad, U can gain more knowledge that U cann't get from your books.Different countries have different cultures.作者: 一夜光明 时间: 2011-12-3 12:23
我可以帮你指出有几个语法错误，一个是“which are quite differen to our homeland”different to 好像没有这个用法，应该是different from。另一个是“Perhaps foreign educations are not always better than that here”这句that 应该换成those 以和前面的foreign education对应作者: 时尚岛01 时间: 2011-12-4 10:10
If you want to get more knowledge,I think wherever you are,you can do it efforts.
Not only go to study abroad to improve yourself.
This is my opinion.May be it's wrong.
How do you think?just do it .作者: caifeng1003 时间: 2012-1-29 15:48
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