1）句子意思表达不完整
× The lecture was given in such an interersting way.
√ The lecture was given in such an inereresting way that everyone enjoyed it very much.
2）句子的主从关系模糊
× We are going to visit John, and he is our English friend.
√ We are going to visit John who is our English friend.
3) 连接词使用不当
× The main reason he was absent was because he was ill.
√ The main reason he was absent was that he was ill.
4) 主谓不一致
× Every teacher and student were invited to go to the party.
√ Every teacher and student was invited to go to the party.
5) 中心不明白
× I was watching a film last night, I suddenly found Mary sitting in front of me.
√ When I was watching a film last night, I suddenly found Mary sitting in front of me.作者: qiangwei 时间: 2007-10-19 08:30
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