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标题: 【写作模范】英语小作文：感谢信 [打印本页]
作者: evaxiaofan    时间: 2010-12-10 10:19     标题: 【写作模范】英语小作文：感谢信

感谢信是为了答谢对方的邀请、问候、关心、帮助和支持而写的公关礼仪书信。

感谢信的写作主要分以下三个部分：首先开头要明确的对对方提供的帮助或赠送的礼品表示谢意。主体部分则需列举对方提供的帮助，说明该帮助所起的作用，或表达对所受礼品的喜爱以及以后如何使用及收藏等。结尾部分需再次表达诚挚的谢意并问候对方。

写作三部曲

表达感谢之情及原因→提及曾受过什么帮助或者说明喜爱礼品的原因→再次表达诚挚的谢意。

注意：
表达感谢时要情真意切，不能过于夸张；结尾处最好表达希望回报对方的愿望，更显真诚。

范文解析

Directions: You have just celebrated your birthday and your university classmate Jack has sent you an MP3 as the gift for your birthday. Write a letter to express your thanks to him.

Write the letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Wang Hua” instead. Do not write the address.


Dear Jack,

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for the MP3 you sent to me as my birthday gift last Sunday.

How considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday. It’s one of the most wonderful gifts I’ve ever got and I like it very much. You have a positive genius for selecting the right gift!

The four years I spent with you at university has always been the most pleasant period in my life. I will cherish this memory forever. How nice it would be to see you again.

I am looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical birthday gift.

Sincerely yours,

Wang Hua



常用句式

1、I am writing to express my thanks for…
我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意。

2、I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for…
在信中我要为……向您表达我诚挚的谢意。

3、Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to…
非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。

4、I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时帮助和支持。

5、Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and we will nurture/cherish them forever.
没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远铭刻在心。

6、Thanks again for you kind help.
对您的帮助再次表示感谢。

7、My true gratitude is beyond any words / description.
感激之情溢于言表。

8、Please accept my thanks.
请接受我的谢意。

10、Your help is very much appreciated by each one of us.
对于您的帮助，我们每个人都心存感激。
作者: kobe    时间: 2010-12-10 23:47

本帖最后由 kobe 于 2010-12-10 23:50 编辑

dear eva
      I am writing to express my thanks for you do everything for me
      I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for everything
Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us

Your help is very much appreciated by each one of us
                                                                                                       Ur best Friend                                                                                                           kobe




作者: xiaomeixin    时间: 2010-12-11 10:59

Dear eva

I am writting to express my thanks for what you do for our BBS.

Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to improve our writting skills.

Pls accept my thanks.

Many thanks.&Best regards.

MEI XIN XIAO
作者: evaxiaofan    时间: 2010-12-11 20:19

本帖最后由 evaxiaofan 于 2010-12-11 20:24 编辑

回复 2# kobe


Dear Kobe,

I am writting to express my thanks for what you said.

I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance .
and thanks for what you have done for our tingroom.

Please accept my thanks.

Your best friends

Eva

作者: evaxiaofan    时间: 2010-12-11 20:23

本帖最后由 evaxiaofan 于 2010-12-11 20:24 编辑

回复 3# xiaomeixin


Dear meixin,

I am writting to express my thanks for all what you said.

I wanna say you have done do a lot for our tingroom as well, and give us so many support .

My true gratitude is beyond any words / description.

Sincerely yours,

Eva





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