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S(1) Topic: the issue to be commented
S(2) Thesis: different attitudes towards it.
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S(3) Its advantages or one side's opinion
S(4) Detailswww.rr365.com
S(5) Transition
S(6) Its disadvantages or the other side's opinion
S(7) Details
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S(8) The balanced view
第一段S(1)引出要评论的事物或观点。S(2) 是简单扼要的提一下在这个问题上人们的两种不同看法,第二段S(3), S(4) 是一种看法,如赞成的观点或事物的优点。S(5) 使承上启下的过渡句, 引出下面另一种看法。S(6)S(7) 就是反对的观点或事物的缺点。 第三段则是平衡这两种看法,谈谈作者的观点。
评论型作文的句型如下:
1.The answers to these questions often vary from person to person.
2.Attitudes towards the problem usually differ sharply/widely.
3.Whether it has more advantages or vice versa , one thing is certain:…………
4.There is no doubt/ denying that………
5.It certainly offer people greater opportunity to …………
6.Despite/For all the advantages, it also brings its own problems……。
7.A good case in point / example is………。
8.As opposed/ contrary to widely/ commonly/ generally held/accepted ideas, I argue……
9.They may be right about………, but they seem to fail to mention / take into account……
10.What these people fail to understand is that …………
11.Take…。for example,
12.Suppose that……。
题目:The Development of a Private Car
Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Development of a Private Car. You should write no less than 150 words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:
1.小汽车开始进入中国普通家庭。
2.小汽车带来的方便和舒适。
3.小汽车带来的交通和污染问题。
4.我的看法。