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作者: wswshishui    时间: 2010-11-3 09:59     标题: I'm a new joiner

本帖最后由 areyouready 于 2010-11-8 01:23 编辑

Respected friends:
           I'm very (gladed) to join you. In this place,I hope to make friends.And hope to improve my English.

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作者: kobe    时间: 2010-11-3 11:59

great!
nice 2 meet u

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作者: areyouready    时间: 2010-11-3 16:36

回复 1# wswshishui


    i have corrected some of your mistakes which you should pay attention to.hope you can do a better job next time .anyway welcome you here!

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作者: 小雅儿    时间: 2010-11-3 19:55

I'm very gladed（glad） to join you. In this place,（here）I hope to make friends.with you（And hope ）to improve my English.
professional habit

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