Practise Writing in English[2011.4.14] English, content

bonnieju

Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

　　You have heard that your friend, Jim, wishes to sell his bike. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.
　　Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.
　　
范文:

April 12, 2010

Dear Jim,

　　I have heard that you wish to sell your bike. At the moment I just need a bike by which I can go to do my part-time job on the weekend. Would you please tell me what color your bike is and how well it works? And is it possible that I buy it at the cost of 50 yuan?

Yours,
Mary

eileengao

可能楼主不小心打错了，应该是bike ,看下面的内容就知道了呀

陈秀玲

哈哈，楼主不小心也打错字了哦，hike改为bike

bonnieju

回复 2# 65663548


    不好意思，的确是手误，是bike, 通过下文可以看出来。谢谢参与。

bonnieju

回复 3# eileengao


    是bike,亲爱的，已经改过来了。谢谢参与！

bonnieju

回复 4# 陈秀玲


     是bike,亲爱的，已经改过来了。谢谢参与！