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心魔作祟

I like for you to be still: it is as through you are absent

and you hear me from far away and my voice does not touch you

It seems as through your eyes had flown away

and it seems that a kiss had sealed your mouth

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我喜欢你是静静的：仿佛你消失了一样

你从远处聆听我，我的声音却无法触及你

好像你的目光已经游离而去如同一个吻，封缄了你的嘴

as all things are filled with my soul

your emerge from the things, fill with my soul

you are like my soul, a butterfly of dreams

and you are like the word melancholy

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如同我积满一切的灵魂

而你从一切中出现，充盈了我的灵魂

你像我的灵魂，像一只梦想的蝴蝶

你如同“忧郁”这个词

I like for you to be still, and you seem far away

It sounds as though you are lamenting, a butterfly cooing like a dove

And you hear me from far away, and my voice does not reach you

Let me come to be still in your silence

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我喜欢你是静静的：好像你已远去

你听起来想在悲叹，一只如鸽般细语的蝴蝶

你从远处聆听我，我的声音却无法触及你

让我在你的静谧中安静无声

tingroom

好美 译者水平真赞啊。

城南小巷

不得不说，，好深奥啊，看不懂诶

心魔作祟

回复 2# tingroom


    恩 ，当然了！我想这也是个诗人翻译的！

心魔作祟

回复 3# 城南小巷


    这是一首诗吗？可定时比较有深度的，会有很多的修辞还有倒装啊，什么的！我们只要深深的欣赏就好！