如何翻译长句子，分析句子结构？ 句子, world

xuxiaolin

The day my fiance fell to his death ,it started to snow  ,just like any November day ,just like the bottom hadn't fallen out of my world when he freefell off the roof .His body ,when I found it ,was lightly covered with snow . It snowed almost every day for the next four months ,while I sat on the couch and watched it pile up .

翻译的时候该如何安排句子的前后顺序，才能读下来比较顺畅。还有那句“just like the bottom hadn't fallen out of my world”是不是什么固定短语？

tingroom

这个不是固定短语，没那么长啦。
应该是我的世界倾倒的意思。
英翻中的顺序你怎么读的顺怎么安排啊，这个我没仔细研究过规律。