I am a freshman of Lianhe University, majoring in Applied Physics.(1)________________________________ to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.
My parents are both laid-off workers, (2)______________________________To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply for a RMB20,000 bank loan.
I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career so as to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. (3)__________________________
Sincerely yours,
Song Xue
1. I am writing in a hope that I may obtain a bank load.
2. so it's beyond their power to finance me through the collage education.
3. and I'm looking forward to your reply soon.
(1)I am writing in a hope that I make up chance a bank loan
(2)so it is beyoud their power to finance me through college education
(3)And I am looking forward to your reply soon.
1 I'm writing in a hope that I may obtain a bank load.
2 so it's beyond their power to finance me through the collage education.
3 and I'm looking forward to your reply soon.
(1)I am writing in a hope that I make up chance a bank loan.
(2)so it is beyoud their power to afford me through college education
(3)And I am looking forward to your reply soon.
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