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雨落风残

作为一名写作老师，我从来都说服不了学生，让他们明白作文需要修改。

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Daisyhappy

作为一名写作老师，我从来都说服不了学生，让他们明白作文需要修改
As a teacher,I (could)never let students understand  that the compositions need  to reword.

zouxizhi

As a writing teacher, i never persuade students to realize that an essay needs improving.

簿子酒

作为一名写作老师，我从来都说服不了学生，让他们明白作文需要修改。
As a writing teacher,i can't pesuade student the composition need to be modified/revised~

曾复志

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pliu5

As a wrting teacher, I can never persuade my students and let them understand that the writing needs to be revised.

cheungstephen

As a writing teacher, I never could convince my students of the need to revise.
Today I have a bit progress from the sentence above.

jane019

作为一名写作老师，我从来都说服不了学生，让他们明白作文需要修改。
As a writing teacher, I have never persuade my students to  modify their compositions.

cheungstephen

作为一名写作老师，我从来都说服不了学生，让他们明白作文需要修改。
As a writing teacher, I never persuade my students to let them understand that compsition is to be modified by themselves.

chen8167

Being a Teacher,I cannot persuade my student to understand the composition need to modify

小钰钰

As a writing teacher, I can't persuade my students