鲁迅语:词典不离手,冷汗不离身（四） 鲁迅语, 冷汗, 词典

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四、戒主语暗淡
主语是句子的灵魂， 定住译文的主语的是关键性一步棋。主语定偏了，整个句子将显得松散乏力，甚至误导读者。
如果这个问题不解决，势必影响两国的利益。
Failure to settle this issue is bound impair the relations between the two countries seriously.
If the problem is not solved , it is sure to affect the interests between the two countries
在上面的两种译文中，显然第一种译文主语选得好，句子流畅。
共同的利益把我们两个伟大的国家连接在一起。
What holds our two great nations together is the cement of common interests.

nelsonchou

is very good