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标题: 【参赛征文】Sky [打印本页]

作者: 红星帝国    时间: 2010-7-27 22:24     标题: 【参赛征文】Sky

本帖最后由 红星帝国 于 2010-8-10 23:00 编辑

第三组:mountain tree flower photo sky.

Sky.

once,looking at the sky

there some eagles fly

lost in thought

let me back

.

come to the past

here is my choice

even if improtance ignored

from the east sun rises

.

an end to the past

has been put

I am myself still

well I've really lost

                  .                       

green as the mountain is

not any more living

trees waving

saying nothing

flowers blown

silent keeping

.

why the thing

is so extinct

for the way for timing

I am used to applying

.

all of a sudden I cry

as sorrowful as a boy

realizing it just a nightmare

knowing future is over there

.

the past has passed

without any tracks

while something still left

remaining forever photos in heart

.

.as time goes by

not a boy but a guy

deeply printed in my heart

the real meaning of time

..

Once looking at the sky

still some eagles fly

but I smiled and said

with my time

I have my own sky


作者: beckyxujin    时间: 2010-7-31 22:07

确实是!
作者: 凉茶    时间: 2010-8-2 11:59

支持,小红星同学!!
作者: 猪小青    时间: 2010-8-3 16:37

支持,支持~~
作者: zouyue0612    时间: 2010-8-4 20:09

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作者: areyouready    时间: 2010-8-18 13:26

youth is the most memorable thing when we have realized we are not young any longer.that's the feeling of mine after reading this wonderful poem.
作者: evaxiaofan    时间: 2010-8-24 11:22

You  are so great!!~~




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