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标题: 【写作模范】英语小作文:祝贺信 [打印本页]

作者: evaxiaofan    时间: 2010-11-29 10:53     标题: 【写作模范】英语小作文:祝贺信

祝贺信是由于某种原因向收信人道贺的信件,一般包含三个部分:1. 点明要祝贺的事情,并向对方道贺;2. 详述祝贺的事情;3. 再次祝贺。祝贺信除了向对方道贺以外,还可表达祝福、期望等。语言应热情洋溢,满怀喜悦。

写作三部曲

说明事由并表达自己忠心的祝贺(首段)—>展开事件评论,赞扬收信人(主体段落)—>再次表达良好祝愿(结尾段)

注意:
在写作主要内容的时候,可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因,并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。

范文解析

Directions: Write a letter to your best friend Li Ming, congratulating him on accepting admission to a postgraduate program. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use“Wang Hua”instead. Do not write the address.


Dear Li Ming,

I am writing to convey my warm congratulations on your admission to a postgraduate at Beijing University.

I must say that I was not surprised to hear this good news. I know that you have been desirous of furthering your study in a prestigious university and how industrious and perseverant you have always been in order to realize this dream. I am delighted that the four years of your hard work has finally been rewarded in this way. It is obvious that you will have a wide-open future ahead of you.

Congratulations again. I wish you all the best in your future life and study.

Sincerely,

Wang Hu



常用句式

1、Heartfelt congratulations on…
真心祝贺……

2、Congratulations, all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!
祝贺你,我们都为你所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。

3、I am so happy to hear that…
听到……我真的非常高兴。

4、I write to congratulate you upon…
我写信来祝贺你……

5、I offer you my warmest congratulations on your…
对于你的……我表示热烈的祝贺。

6、I wish you still further success!
预祝你取得更大的成功!

7、We look forward to bragging about you in the years ahead.
我们希望在未来的岁月中能骄傲地谈起你。

8、Please accept our sincerest congratulations and very best wishes for all the good future.
谨向你表示由衷的祝贺和美好的祝福。

9、Congratulations to you on being awarded the prize/getting the scholarship.
祝贺你荣获此奖项、获得奖学金。

10、May lasting happiness and joy be yours/with you forever.
愿幸福和欢乐永远伴随你!

11、I take pride in your achievements and would like to avail myself of this opportunity to extend my best wishes for your success.
对你取得的成就我深感自豪,我愿借此机会对你的成功表示由衷的祝贺。
作者: tingroom    时间: 2010-11-30 10:48

回复 1# evaxiaofan


      it is useful,and I will try to use it some day to convey my congratulations to my friends like you eva....




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