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标题: 托福写作:如何锻造地道英语句子-1 [打印本页]

作者: 幽幽草    时间: 2007-7-6 17:02     标题: 托福写作:如何锻造地道英语句子-1

 1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
  改进:Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.

  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

  3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
  改进:You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

  6. Their brain is still very young.
  改进: They are still immature.

  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

  8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
作者: 幽幽草    时间: 2007-7-6 17:04     标题: 托福写作:如何锻造地道英语句子-2

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

  16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills.
  改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

  19. They cannot think clearly.
  改进: They cannot think straight.

  20. Money can improve their living standard.
  改进: Money can improve their life.
作者: liuyuhua    时间: 2007-7-24 08:00

谢谢楼主!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
作者: oimanokyo    时间: 2007-8-2 15:30

very good ,I can't think of them as I am a CHINESE
作者: 胃溃疡    时间: 2008-7-9 12:05


作者: 胃溃疡    时间: 2008-7-9 12:09






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