Need suggestions HELP

fielding

The objective of my resume:


A young man, graduated from a not outstanding college,specialized in English, had to chose another road to get a job easier. And then,he tried to be an accountant. At 2004, He got his first job in Changfa Refrigeration Company as a storage accountant. With his strong learning ability and so much efforts, he promoted step-by-step ,and finally became an account officer after four years when he left. And now, another four years later, he was in charge of whole financial business of a domestic investment company. At the same time, he encountered the bottleneck of occupation. And he would like to attempt to new opportunities and challenges in foreign companies. He prefers doing a challenging work rather than boring one!


I need suggestions to improve it and find mistakes. Thanks

wengler

A young man, graduated from a not outstanding college,specialized in English, had to chose another road to get a job easier.

不是很明白，能不能告诉我你想说什么？