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高考英语书面表达练习精选
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最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍，请你结合下表，就这一现象写一篇短文。
现象 1．根据最近调查，约25％的大学生打零工
2．在暑假，这一数字将增至72％
3．大学生常做的零活有：家教、服务员、售货员等
原因 4．想赚钱支付一部分日益增长的学费
5．想经济上独立，买一些自己想买的东西
意义
(内容由考生自己拟定) 6．
7．
8．
注意： 1．词数：120左右。文章的开头已为你写好。
2．参考词汇： 调查survey; 家庭教师tutor; 学费tuition; 经济地economically; 视野outlook
According to a recent survey,__________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
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书面表达
高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。就这一话题你班正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料。词数120左右。
pains solutions
相貌、体形不美 不必在意
不被他人理解,朋友少 加强沟通
学习滞后，压力大 ？
零花钱不多 ？
注意：1. 开头已写好，不记入词数。
2. 语言通顺，结构严谨。
Boys and girls，
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.
3
(一)
党中央号召全国人民树立“八荣八耻”荣辱观，仔细观看下面这组漫画，根据要求以 Beauty Comes From Action为题写一篇120词左右的短文。
漂亮女郎的行为
残疾老人的行为
你的评论
4
假设你是李平，是“江海中学”的学生。请你围绕“ 建设社会主义新农村 ”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全江苏省的中学生写一封信，介绍社会主义新农村的内容并发表自己的看法。
要点提示：
1．加强水利设施建设，以便灌溉 (irrigate) 农田,使农村居民都能安全用水。为使农民出行便利(facilitate)，仍将继续进行公路建设。
2．在农村将努力扩大使用清洁燃料,如沼气(marsh gas)、太阳能。农村电力网建设也将完成。
3．农村教育状况、农村卫生服务体系(public health care system)、农村社会保障体系（social security system）也都将得到改善。农村居民有更多的文化。
4．自己的想法：1）。。。。。。 2）。。。。。。 3）。。。。。。 。。。。。。
注意：1．词数：120左右。书信的开头已为你写好，不计入词数。
2．内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu
Dear fellow students,
Our government is aiming to build a new socialist countryside . I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
Now, I’d like to tell you something about the programme
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下面是我市1995年至2005年电视机和收音机产量的变化图。请简要说明其变化规律，分析其原因，并总结出结论。
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随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议 。（字数 120 词左右，不计开头 ）
大多数同学认为 部分同学认为 个人看法
能活跃气氛 ；
能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备 ；
能给大家带来快乐 课间时间太短 ，播放音乐达不到预期的效果；
课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音 。 考生陈述
Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not .___________________________________________________________________________
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假设你是小明，请根据你校美化校园的规划，用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封短信，介绍该规划。短信的主要内容如下：
规划目的 美化校园、净化空气
创造良好学习和生活环境
规划内容
(由考生自己决定) 种植花草树木
建一个植物园，供参观、实践
建一个小花园，供休息、读书
建几座名人雕塑，激励师生
---
注意：1．短信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．词数：120左右。
3．参考词汇：雕塑—statue (n.) 植物园—botanical garden (n.)
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.…………….
_______________________________________________________________________________
Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
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高三阶段学习比较紧张，正确的学习方法尤为重要。下表显示了两位同学不同的学习方法，请简述并发表你的观点，字数在120词左右。文章开头已给出。
学习方法 李华 王海 你的观点
白天 上课专心听讲，尽可能经常向老
师请教疑难问题。 上课打瞌睡，漏掉了
许多要点。
晚上 花较少的时间完成作业，早点休息，上课经常保持旺盛的精力。 花较多时间完成作业，熬夜学习，导致注意力无法集中。
参考词汇：①attentively 专心 ②energetic 精力旺盛
③concentrate on 集中注意力于 ④effectively有效地
Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both them work but they gave different leaning methods.________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
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假如你是李华，最近你对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查，请根据下列图例，用英语写一篇报告，并陈述你的观点。
注意：1、词数120左右；
2、开头已给出，不记入总词数；
3、提示：设施 facility
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某中学生英语报社举办中学生“2005感动中国”观后感征文。你被2005感动中国人物洪战辉的事迹深深感动。根据下面提示写一篇征文，投给这家报社。
洪战辉事迹简介：
1、1982年出生于河南农村；
2、1994年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴；
3、1995年，母亲不堪重负离家出走，他边学习边照顾捡来的妹妹和生病的父亲，担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学，并一直带着妹妹上大学，照看她……
要求发表自己的感想，可适当发挥。
注意：内容连贯，适当发挥；
词数：120左右。
参考词汇：2005感动中国 Touch China 2005
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自从 “超级女声”在全国大获成功后荧屏上青少年才艺展示表演越来越多。就此，有些学生认为中学生应专注于读书，不应该过早踏上舞台；有些学生则不以为然。请根据以下表格内容，以Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows? 为题，为某英语杂志写一篇120左右的英语短文。
看法 理由
太早参加演出，不利学习 1. 没有形成自己的演出风格，仅靠模仿，不是真艺术；
2. 女孩们过多迷于“明星梦”，忽视学习；
3. 演出花费太多时间与精力，不利集中精力学习。
应该参加演出，展示才华 1. 表演节目提供了参与社会活动的机会；
2. 丰富演出经验，有利于将来的音乐生涯；
3. 人各有梦，抓住机会实现梦想。
你的观点 请自由发挥1. 。。。。。。 2. 。。。。。。 3. 。。。。。。
注意: 1. 行文应连贯流畅, 内容要充实完整;
2. 题目和开头语已经给出, 不计入总词数;
3. 词数要求: 至少120左右。
Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows?
Since “Super Voice Girls” became a big hit all over the country, there are more and more teen talent shows on the TV screen now. Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows? Some students think so.
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在日前召开的两会上“建设社会主义新农村”成为热点话题 。 请你根据下列提示，以“New Socialist Countryside in the Future” 为题描绘一下未来“建设社会主义新农村”的蓝图 。 字数 ：120左右
项目 内容
农业生产 许多农业技术现代化了，科学家帮助农民使用最新科技，增加农业产量，又不损害环境
新型农民 有知识、懂科技、知法律、会管理
生活状况 收入增加，住房改善，环境优美
社会保障 子女接受免费义务教育，医疗等保障系统不断
你的态度 ----------
参考词汇：义务教育——compulsory education
医疗保障系统——medical care system
New Socialist Countryside in the Future
With the efforts and support from the government in many aspects, a new socialist countryside will appear in China. _______________________________
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假设你是李华.你将代表学校参加国际中学生论坛，就你所在城市的教育状况发表演讲。请根据惟下两幅图表,介绍你市高中学生构成情况及毕业去向的选择，并针对两幅图表中的任何一个数据所反映的情况发表你自己的看法。
注意：1．文章开头和结尾已经给出；
2．词数120左右(不包括已给部分)
3. 参考词汇: 图表: chart 职业学校: vocational school 外来务工人员: non-local workers
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about the high school education of my city.
______________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
I believe the future of education in our city is promising!
That’s all. Thank you.
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某中学生英语刊物举办《学校生活》征文活动，请根据下面四幅图画的内容，写一篇120词左右的短文应征，可适当发表自己的观点。
注意：1．图中人物小芳和爸爸； 2．参考词汇：地狱hell; 抱怨complain
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根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。
要求：1．不仅要表述出图中的内容，还要发表自己的感想；
2．字数：120字左右；
3．开头已给出。
One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over.…
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你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消?请你根据王表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为 另一些同学认为
1．不应该取消
2．听是语言的四项基本技能之一，不能忽视
3．听是获取信息的重要途径之一
4．国际合作日益增多，听、说能力应加强 1．应该取消
2．考试中各地收听效果好坏不一，不公平
3．英语教师和语音设备城乡差异过大
4．今后并非人人都要与外国人进行口头交流
注意：1．文章的起始句已给出。
2．词数：120左右（不包括已给出的起始句）
3．参考词汇：取消cancel 国际合作international cooperation
The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be. kept or canceled. Some students think that listening test should not be canceled.
话题作文预测
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人们一直面临着上学难、看病难、买房难的问题。如：大部分人都负债买房。
今年政府将更加重视民生。教育、医疗、住房，就业等状况将会得到改善。如：义务教育免费、减轻农民负担、控制房价、扩大就业等, 让人民群众持续地得到实惠。请根据以上所述写篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。
1：词数：120左右。 2. 参考词汇：民生 the people’s livelihood
义务教育 compulsory education
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误：
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多
1． 句子结构错误 ①双谓语现象②句子结构混乱
2． 动词使用错误 ①时态错误②语态错误③滥用be动词
3． 汉语式英语
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 名词单复数错误
三、词义模糊，用词不够准确
四、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接.
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目前，‘民生’问题受到空前关注。为保障民生，改善民生，政府将采取一系列措施。请根据下面漫画写一篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。
注意: 1. 恰当表达图画含义, 要有适当发挥. 2.词数：120左右；
参考词汇： 保障ensure vt 完善 perfect vt
养老金 pension n 医保Medicare n
One possible sentence
1, The government will provide pension, Medicare and training for jobs.
2, To people’s delight, various laws are to be perfected.
Some legal service centers will be set up to protect people’s rights.
3, To make sure that people can live safely and peacefully, the government will make great efforts.
4, The government will try its best to stop water and air pollution, so people can enjoy clean water and fresh air.
其它预测话题
第一节 网络时代
话题1 高三学生能不能上网
话题2 网上购书
话题3 你同意学生网上交友吗
第二节 和谐社会与节约型社会
话题1 节约——从身边做起
第三节 父母与孩子之间
话题1 敬重父母
话题2 父母陪读
第四节 健康生活
话题1 早餐的重要性
话题2 快餐为何在国内受欢迎
话题3 体育锻炼的重要性
话题4 健康掌握在自己手中 (4月18日练习)
第五节 中学生学习与生活
话题1 中学生带手机上学的利与弊
话题2 中学生对考试失败持什么态度
话题3 中学生最想说的话
话题4 中学生追随时尚的问题（ 4月23日练习）
第六节 变化与发展
话题1 农民生活发生的变化
话题2 关于家庭拥有私人汽车的观点与看法
话题3 电脑进入家庭
第七节 旅游
话题1 对生态游的看法
话题2 旅游广告
话题3 “五一”旅游建议
话题4 度假方式的变化及原因
第八节 电视、电影与广告
话题1 关于看电视的利与弊
话题2 广告的利与弊
第九节 环境保护
话题1 呼吁全社会保护环境
话题2 保护湿地
话题3 创建“绿色家园”
第十节 社会生活
话题1 民生
话题2 生活的小事情――大道理
话题3 追随时尚
话题4 城市是否可以饲养宠物
话题5 文明礼貌
话题6 全社会学英语热潮问题
话题7 志愿者活动
话题8 ……
书面表达参考范文
参考范文1：
According to a recent survey, about 25 percent of college students have a part-time job．During summer vacation, this figure will increase to 72 percent. College students are working as tutors, waiters or salesmen.
Why do they want part-time jobs？First，they want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition. Second, they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want.
In my opinion, by doing part-time jobs, college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook. What’s more, part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance/opportunity to know the outside world. So it’s of great significance for college students to
do part-time jobs.
参考范文2：
Boys and girls，
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. First, some of us are upset about their body styles and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, parents and classmates. Facing this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have fewer friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good. Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination. Last, some of us don’t have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn’t it strange? So long as we have some, that’s enough. And we can learn to spend money!
That’s all. Thank you.
参考范文3：
In the above cartoons, a young woman happily eats bananas and throws the peels on the street, unaware of the fact that such actions not only pollute the environment but also bring dangers to others. A disabled man struggles to properly pick up the peels she has left behind and put them in the dustbin.
In my opinion, despite the girl's beauty, it is the disabled man who is truly beautiful. Being well dressed is of great importance in keeping a good appearance. However, we should always keep this in mind: True beauty comes from one's actions . The old man is displaying a more beautiful virtue even though he is disabled , compared with the young girl.
While most of us enjoy pretty appearances, I think it is more important to have a clean and beautiful soul. Only such souls can create a beautiful society.
参考范文4： A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu
Dear fellow students,
Our government is aiming to build a new socialist countryside . I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal
Now, I’d like to tell you something about the programme.
First of all, more water facilities will be installed to irrigate the farmland and allow rural residents to drink safe water. At the same time , road construction will continue with the goal of facilitating farmers' work.
According to the programme, efforts will be made to expand the use of clean fuels such as marsh gas and solar energy in rural areas and the construction of the rural power network will be completed.
We’ll find that the rural education conditions , public health care system and social security system will be improved. Rural residents will have more access to culture,too.
I think our dream of a new socialist countryside will come true soon.
Dear fellow students, let's study hard now and try to use our knowledge to build our new socialist countryside in the near future
。。。 。。。
Li Ping
参考范文5：
In 1995, only about 500 TV sets were produced in our city while the number of radios was six times as large. But in 2005, things were quite different. We can clearly see that the production of TV sets went up sharply while that of radios fell quickly during the ten years.
There are several reasons for the great change. In the first place, owing to the advances in science and technology, it is possible for factories to produce more TV sets. Secondly, with the improvement of the living standard, people are becoming richer and richer and more people can afford a TV set. Moreover, thanks to the increasing desire for entertainment, people tend to turn to TV to relax themselves.
All these factors in turn motivate factories to produce larger quantities and higher quality of TV sets. That is why the production of TV sets is on the increase while that of radios is on the decline
参考范文6：
Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not .The opinions are divided .
Most of the students think that music should be played .As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere .Besides , after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness .This can help us make full preparations for the next class .Listening to music also makes us feel happy .
On the other hand , some students don’t think so .In their opinion , they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music .
In my opinion , it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break .In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest .Besides ,I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.
参考范文7：
.Dear Peter ,
I’d like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.
The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher ,and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in .
According to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees ,flowers and grass in and around our school .A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in .Besides ,we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest .What’s more ,some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder . ---
Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours ,
Xiao Ming
参考范文8：
Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively, trying to catch everything that the teachers say in class. Besides, she often consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day. However, Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning. He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework, so he often feels sleepy in class. As a result, he misses lots of key points and it is usually takes him more time to finish his homework, which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing. In my opinion, Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to to enjoy herself. So I prefer her learning method.
参考范文9：
Recently I made a survey of senior 3 students on physical training. Only 35% of the surveyed students do sports. There are many reasons for this. Half of the students say they have too much homework and have not enough time to do exercise. 30% of them complain that they have no places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities. 10% feel that they live too far away from the places and some even don’t know how to take exercise. Because of lack of physical activities, many students are in poor health. We should realize the importance of taking exercise, and measures should be taken to improve the present situation. It would be greatly appreciated that our government and social organizations as well could offer some financial aid.
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Recently, I watched Touch China 2005 on TV and was deeply moved by the story of Hong Zhanhui.
Hong was born in Henan Province in 1982. When he was 12, his father got mental disease and one day brought home an abandoned newly-born girl. A year later, his mother deserted the family because of the heavy burden. Hong began to shoulder the responsibility for taking care of his little sister and sick father. Hong loved school and studied hard. Finally he was admitted to college but he took his sister with him and continued to care for her.
Looking back, I feel much ashamed of myself. I have been taking everything in my life for granted, namely care from parents, luxury material life, respect from others, and the like. Personally, I hold the view that there are many good qualities in Hong worth our learning, his sense of responsibility, courage and above all a loving heart.
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Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows?
Since “Super Voice Girls” became a big hit all over the country, there are more and more teen talent shows on the TV screen now. Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows? Some students think so. In their opinion, teenagers haven’t formed their own style of performance yet. Just imitating their icons’ voice and actions is not the real art of singing and performing. It’s reported that some young girls are too absorbed in “star dream”, thus ignoring their study. What’s more, such TV shows take up too much time and energy. As middle school students, they should concentrate on their study at present. However, other students think it right for teenagers to show their talents of art. TV shows like “Super Voice Girls” provide students with an opportunity to participate in social activities, where they can gain rich experience, which will surely contribute a lot to their future musical career. As we all know, different people have different dreams. It’s very important for them to grasp the chance and try to make their dreams come true.
Personally, important as study is, it is not the only thing we can do. We should have a wide range of opportunities to develop our abilities. We may as well show our qualities to people when possible.
(or: As for myself, although it is a good stage for young girls to show their ability, as middle school students, they must first have more knowledge. They should put more effort into their schoolwork.)
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New Socialist Countryside in the Future
With the efforts and support from the government in many aspects, a new socialist countryside will appear in China. There will be more new farmers with the basic knowledge of science and technology, laws and management. Many farming techniques will have been modernized. With the help of scientists, farmers will use the latest technologies to increase agricultural production without harming the environment. As a result, the yearly income of the farmers will be increased and their housing conditions will be improved as well. People in the new countryside will enjoy a clean, tidy and orderly environment. Besides, the government will provide free compulsory education for rural kids and also perfect medical care system for farmers.
As students, we should study hard to be well prepared for the future construction of the new socialist countryside, thus making our country more beautiful and powerful.
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Ladies and gentlemen:
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I'm going to talk about the high school education of my city.
From Chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. There are even 1 percent foreign students.
According to chart 2, the students' choices after graduation have presented a wider variety. Sixty percent of them intend to go to university. Thirty percent choose to enter vocational schools, and the rest ten percent plan to go abroad for further studies.
(1) I think we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago.
(2) I think our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers. For example, their children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students.
(3) I think with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture.
I believe the future of the education in our city is promising!
That's all. Thank you.
参考范文14：
One possible version :
One day , just before going to school as usual , a schoolgirl , Xiao Fang complained to her father , who was reading a newspaper , saying school life nowadays was dull , she hated going to school and that school was just like the hell . On hearing what his daughter said , Father , silent all the time , said that it was time she went to school with all her complaints over , for in the father’s eyes , no one could change the present situation .
There’s no doubt that almost all students dislike school life today , but everyone has the responsibility to end the examination-oriented education . School life should be interesting and colorful , just as the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy .”
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One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their minds. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.
Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?
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One possible version
The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be. kept or canceled. Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. $o it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent. But others don' t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.
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Nowadays, most people can not afford to buy a house, to go to school or to see a doctor. As we all know, most people are in debt for a house.
This year, the government are paying much more attention to the people’s livelihood. A lot of measures will be taken to improve it. The conditions of education, medical services, housing and employment will be greatly improved. For example, the government will provide free compulsory education. Also, the farmers’ burden is surely going to be lightened. In addition to this, the prices of the houses are to be controlled. Moreover, the government will create many more chances for jobs.
As is previously stated, we can see that China is getting richer and stronger, and people’s life will be getting better and better. Personally, I think we should study harder to make contributions to our country.
过渡词
Nowadays, most people can not afford to buy a house, to go to school or to see a doctor. As we all know, most people are in debt for a house.
This year, the government are paying much more attention to the people’s livelihood. A lot of measures will be taken to improve it. The conditions of education, medical services, housing and employment will be greatly improved. For example, the government will provide free compulsory education. Also, the farmers’ burden is surely going to be lightened. In addition to this, the prices of the houses are to be controlled. Moreover, the government will create many more chances for jobs.
As is previously stated, we can see that China is getting richer and stronger, and people’s life will be getting better and better. Personally, I think we should study harder to make contributions to our country.
常用过渡词
列举要点常用词 in the first place, first of all, to start with, first(ly) second, third, finally, last but not least, for one thing, for another
增加论点 what’s more, furthermore, also, in addition to this/that, additionally, besides, apart from this/that, not to mention the fact that
其它 However, On the other hand, But, Nevertheless, Despite, Regardless of, In other words, Thanks to, Owing to, Due to, As/So long as, On condition that, As a result, Therefore, Consequently, Surely, Without any doubt, Above all, As is known to all, To tell the truth, To be honest, Honestly speaking, To speak frankly, Importantly, In terms of sth.
半开放式结尾
Nowadays, most people can not afford to buy a house, to go to school or to see a doctor. As we all know, most people are in debt for a house.
This year, the government are paying much more attention to the people’s livelihood. A lot of measures will be taken to improve it. The conditions of education, medical services, housing and employment will be greatly improved. For example, the government will provide free compulsory education. Also, the farmers’ burden is surely going to be lightened. In addition to this, the prices of the houses are to be controlled. Moreover, the government will create many more chances for jobs.
As is previously stated, we can see that China is getting richer and stronger, and people’s life will be getting better and better. Personally, I think we should study harder to make contributions to our country.
半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
In my opinion, …
Personally, （only in this way can we …）
I’m of the opinion that…
Taking everything into account, I think…
As is previously stated, …
In conclusion, … On the whole, … In a word, …
As far as I am concerned, …
… …
参考范文18
Never before has the people’s livelihood been cared about as it is today. To ensure and improve the people’s livelihood, the government is taking a series of measures.
As is shown in the pictures, the government will provide pension, Medicare and training for jobs. To people’s delight, various laws are to be perfected. Moreover, some legal service centers will be set up to protect people’s rights. What’s more, to make sure that people can live safely and peacefully, the government will make great efforts. By the way, the government will try its best to stop water and air pollution, so people can enjoy clean water and fresh air.
Personally the people in our country will surely enjoy a happy life if all the measures above are to be taken effectively. |
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