请大家看看是否有问题 森林

fangting

他们在森林里迷路了，更糟的是夜晚开始降临了。
They lost their way in the forest,and what was worse was night began to fall.

Erikadyn

of course some mistakes here. I polish it  like this"They lost their way in the forest, what was worse ,night began to  fall."

fangting

yeah, of course yours are right,but I think it  must be "They lost their way in the forest,and what was worse was that night began to fall",can you agree with me ?

陈秀玲

回复 2# Erikadyn


    well done !

陈秀玲

回复 3# fangting


   在你原来的帖子上 加上一个“that”就可以啦！所以我现在同意你现在改过的句子

xiaomeixin

他们在森林里迷路了，更糟的是夜晚开始降临了。
They lost their way in the forest,and what was worse wa ...
fangting 发表于 2011-6-8 12:33

    They lost their way in the forest,to make matters worse,the night began befalling.